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TITLE: Serenity untouched
AUTHOR: Bio
CATEGORY: Dreams
DATE SUBMITTED: 5/7/2010
RATING: 5.00

Serenity untouched


they stood by the cliff, let the hours go by

watched the sun slowly sink in to a liquid sky

they held each other through the rest of the night

for tommorrow she would ride the ride of her life


she felt safe in his arms, her hero and guide

and this would be the hardest, longest goodbye

each passing hour, each moment of time

put another little piece of doubt in her mind


"do you remember that day you first saw me" asked serenity

"hard to forget" Eric replied with a smile on his face

"no silly, not THAT first time" she said with a slight coy look

oh you mean in the courtyard” you could almost see the replay in his eyes

she casually walked a little way from eric, and stood closer to the edge of the royal balcony

Eric I'm scared” she said “what if I fail”? She said gently biting her lower lip as she turned and looked at eric


she couldnt remember a time before him

as kids they played till the sun went in

not brother or sister but closer than that

same soul two bodies and a different mom and dad


never treated differently, always the same

never thought about from where Eric came

just appeared one day, no questions were asked

she seemed to know who he was, like a part of her past


Eric got up and walked over to his bride

slid his arms round her waist and felt her sigh

two bodies pressed close in the twin moonlight

two hearts on fire one soul Alight


safe in his arms she never wanted to leave

her face was stroked by a soft passing breeze

she had to smile, her eyes half closed

the last perfect moment she'll ever get to hold


i know youll return to me” he whispered softly


the scream pierced the air with a poisonous sound

her body went stiff then sank to the ground

Eric held her waist and laid her gently to rest

then knelt by her side, her hand in his he pressed




time passed by, an hour maybe more

then her eyes sprung open as she lay on the floor

Eric helped her up, pulled her close to him

and waited for the storm to subside within


s







the first ray broke through the clouds above

the sun found her sitting on the horse she loved

as she said goodbye to the love of her life

one last kiss and she began to ride


the path she rode cut through forests and dales

the horse and the rider like a boat and it's sails

past vast waterfalls and the giant Tree clouds

for miles she rode. not another soul around



she pulled on the reigns, and the horse slowed down





she walked with her horse through the forest of dreams

beautiful sunrays played on beautiful streams

and the time passed slowly then the sky grew dark

looming there before her was the cold stone arch


A clearing in the forest sent a chill thru her bones

the sky was the colour of the slate grey stone

a bitter wind howled like a banshee

and the voice inside screamed at her to turn and flee


she held on tight as the horse gained speed

a wasteland of rock was all the eye could see

thundering hooves heard for miles around

then shards of black rock sprang from out of the ground


the skill of the rider and the trust of the horse

let them weave and dodge death and stay the black course

the rain poured harder and the wind bit deep

and she prayed to the lord their souls to keep


the path ahead cleared and she spurred her mount on

a final mad dash before their fire was gone

then in the corner of her eye something made her head turn

three arrows found their mark and her arm and legs burned


then another found its home in the heart of her steed

and they hit the Ragged ground moving at high speed

thrown clear she bounced along the cold jagged floor

when she came to rest she knew her friend was no more


Laying on the black rock in so much pain

temptation to let her life just ebb away

was overwhelming and she felt herself begin to slide

then the shape of her horse lying prone caught her eye


snapped back to life she knew what to do

with a warriors resolve and the strength of the few

three screams could be heard through the wind and the rain

a moments more rest and she continued on her way


Chapter 2


as she made her way north on the cold black trail

she knew everyone prayed she wouldnt fail

and she kept pushing on thru the searing pain

the noise of the wind nearly driving her insane


about a mile or so on, which felt like 10

she saw a light up ahead which which gave her hope again

as she slowly drew near she saw an old rope bridge

and the worse it looked as she neared the Abyss


she looked down in the chasm all she saw was black

and then she looked at the bridge,and screamed "i wont turn back"

put a foot on the bridge and it creaked and moved

then her whole body weight bleeding and bruised


with every pain racked step, the bridge creaked and groaned

the fire burned intensely deep inside each wound

the savage wind blew hard trying to push her back

and the rain kept on with its relentless attack


halfway across five winged silhouettes

Circled high above the figure so close to death

each one smelt the blood and the circling ceased

crimson ice filled her veins as she heard hell screech


the first hit its target with a sickening thud

knocked her clean off the bridge she grabbed what she could

her hand found the rope and she hung in space

as the others flew by, talons inches from her face


heart beating fast she drew her sword from its sheath

drew an arc through the air, one creature deceased

then she felt the bridge move and looked up above

thrust her sword through the slats took a shower in blood


pulled herself back up, strength was starting to wane

and the wind howled louder almost blind in the rain

there she stood on the bridge knowing all to well

that one wrong move and she would plummet to hell


Looked at the sky watched the hideous shapes

speeding straight towards her at a frightening pace

never moved an inch, waited for the right time

saw everything slowdown through her warriors eyes


sword above her head now breathing with ease

with the creatures in range she dropped to one knee

then pushed hard forward let the blade of her sword

disembowel the black ones, send them into the gorge


racked with pain she cant find the strength

and she wonders if she'll ever see her home again

the most beautiful place that she's ever seen

and slowly she begins to rise to her feet


the bridge sways with violence from side to side

the cold bites deep, the wind howls in her mind

like a single grain of sand in a great divide

she's not even sure if there is another side


the end in sight she could see the the other side

and she sank to her knees, head bowed and cried

in so much pain but she had to carry on

then her instinct told her that something was wrong


she lifted her head and saw the figure of a man

walk towards the rope bridge with a sword in his hand

she rose in a sprint pushed off her front leg

and focused on the sword as it raised above his head.


Chapter 3


As the sword arced down and the blade bit the rope

she launched into the air in a blind leap of hope

the bridge fell away but she was in midflight

drew her sword as she landed and prepared for the fight


facing her opponent and ignoring the pain

she knew that it was now a case of slay or be slain

her sword above her head, pointing up to the sky

and the figure in her sight flashed a confident smile


the first strike came with unexpected speed

a downward blow that brought her to her knees

her weapon took the full brunt of the attack

she rolled past her foe and rose behind his back


brought down her weapon like a devil possessed

he turned and parry'd and her strike barely missed

continued spinning, the blade aimed at her head

then she dropped to the ground barely missing death


rolled backwards and rose, sword ready, to her feet

then attacked once again with Celerity

3 strikes to the head, 2 low, another high

and all in the time it takes to blink an eye


with out a break in pace the battle raged on

sword clashed with sword, forged steel sang its song

horizontal slashes and vertical strikes

warrior on warrior with no end in sight


techniques from years of practice were played

and the air was alive with the whispers of the blades

and the metal sparked little firefly's of death

as the flashes of light danced on glistening sweat


pushed back and exhausted, parry'd low and high strikes

ducked and weaved the flowing blade that reflected the night

saw a chance and took it turned the fight around

unleashed a flurry of strikes that would bring any man down


struck low for the legs, then high for the chest

spun round, leaned back and thrust for his head

and in the same smooth flow she shifted her weight

to perform the post of the dragons gate


her foot and her sword diametrically opposed

he never saw it coming as her foot smashed his nose

and as he reeled back from a superior style

she coyly flashed him a confident smile


she circled her foe, till his back faced the ledge

Launched a furious attack with her razors edge

the clang of the metal, sad narrator to the scene

two lone combatants in an epic unseen


swung her sword in arc across his chest plate

and he brought his mighty weapon down to seal her fate

but she moved to one side and his sword hit the ground

she slammed her foot into his side with a sickening sound


the force from the kick contained so much power

it put an end to the warrior's finest hour

sent tumbling backwards towards the abyss

a meritorious foe dissapeared in the mist


the silence lingered there for a moment or two

took a while to realise what she'd just been through

then reality hit she let her sword hit the floor

and conciousness said tender farewell once more


Chapter 4


the fresh sea breeze gently moved her hair

she smiled and felt safe with her father standing there

snuggled in a little closer, but something felt wrong

now Dissolving into daddy, and the scream was gone.


standing in a corridor scared and all alone

a tear begins to fall thats only 9 years old

as it hits the floor there's an ear-splitting crack

and fire shoots toward the door glowing black


flames climb the walls as the door disappears

and a million tiny shards become a million angry spears

as she turns to run the sunlight catches her eye

looking up from a cornfield at a cloudless sky


moms apple pie washed down with lemonade

gets her up and she smiles at the imprint that she made

reach the edge of the field, she wished she never had

where her house once stood is a smoking pile of ash


turns to the field, sees the ocean rush to shore

breathes a sigh of relief and smiles once more

the water rushes in and rushes faster back

a dead beach is left behind and slowly turning black


as the colour dissapeared leaving darkness all around

she saw a solitary figure lying lifeless on the ground

as the figure grew larger and larger in size

she's pulled closer and closer then....she opens her eyes.


in a flash she's in a crouch, her sword in her hand

looking for threats in this stone barren land

then slowly stands up and puts her sword away

all her wounds are healed and she'll carry on her way


a single flame torch by an arch shaped hole

appeared to be the only way she had to go

the fire lit the way, the unknown once more

and continued on her quest to finally free Erindor


Chapter 5

the tunnel was long she slowly made her way

along the cold damp walls so dank and grey

had to stoop a little bit cause the ceiling was low

but she had to go on, nowhere else to go


as she moved through the gloom, hit her head a few times

caught her arms on the walls, slowly losing her mind

has she walked forever, or maybe not moved at all

then she hears what sounds like a child's bouncing ball


her pace begins to quicken, moving closer to the noise

she hears a nursery rhyme sang by a child's voice

she sees a bend ahead takes the corner then halts

the little girl's before her with her bouncing ball


"one two three four five six seven

watch the angels burn as they fall from heaven

eight nine ten eleven twelve thirteen

open the gates and hear Erindor scream"


she stood stock still, the little girl she recognised

Herself in her garden, she had just turned nine

and the noise of the ball had a hypnotic sound

in a flash the girl was on her and they tumbled to the ground


as her back hit the floor the girl disappeared

and she lay breathing heavy till her head began to clear

rising to her feet, she picked up her sword

looked around, saw nothing and nothing was heard


just about to get the torch where it lay on the floor

when the room got brighter and revealed the great hall

the floor undulated like a chequerboard sea

and shards of sunlight rippled gently in the breeze


a beautiful haze shimmered softly in the air

she felt the warm gentle fingers of the sun in her hair

the staircase before her seemed to stretch on for miles

raised an eyebrow and said "this may well take a while"


put her foot on the top step about to start walking down

stepped off the bottom step onto the chequered ground

a look of suprise etched into her face

at the stairs and the figure with the hair of silver grey


she knew from stories this must be the twelve

and for anyone to see them means they step through hell

his gentle voice and long flowing robes

put her mind at ease with every word he spoke


the twelve were the first ones to create the dream

built a world where the people in were finally free



Chapter 6

they walked for a while, and she listened with intent

as he told her of the war and the coming events

Oneiron would fall, and the connected would die

unless she could find the White Crystal Eye


"How long has this been going on?" she asked

"We first noticed it about a year ago, since then its gradually been getting worse" Torkin replied

"And the white crystal eye is......?"

"It's the power crystal that stores intent, keeps all the worlds together and keeps out that which would tear Oneiron apart."

"And this was stolen?" she asked

"Yes"

"How? Wouldn't this be the one thing that would have the most security?"

"We believe that somehow someone from Ebonos was able to connect with Erindor, and infiltrate the white eye Sanctum."

"Ebonos?" her face in puzzlement

"It is the thirteenth place, a dark menacing place that only those with wicked intent can go when they connect."

"And thats where the White Crystal Eye is now?"

"We believe so; there has been no word from Ebonos in three months."

"You mean that you have someone in there?"

"Yes, but contact has been severed."

"Why have you done nothing before now?"

"We as the keepers of the 12 planes cannot move outside the influence of the White Eye."

"Why?"

"Once outside its protectiveness we are vulnerable to the darkness of Ebonos."

"But aren't you vulnerable now? I mean with the White Eye gone, you're not protected by it."

"You have a point, although if we were to attempt to retrieve it, the chance that we may fail would leave the twelve planes more vulnerable. The Twelve are not a warrior class - we create, we don't destroy."

"I see, so thats why you called on me?"

"We have seen many warriors fail to reach this level, you are only one of three that did."

"So there are two others here?"

"They have been here and returned to their home lands ready to leave as soon as they get word the third one has been found."

"well I guess I should be flattered, but you could have called, I still would have come."

"Of that I have no doubt; we have seen your skills in action: we have been most impressed" he said with a faint smile.

"So how do I know what to do next?"

"When you return all the knowledge you need will be with you"

"About the returning thing, there maybe a slight problem concerning the bridge back."

"The way back is not the way you came. Once you have eaten and rested you will be returned to your homeland."

"Now that's sounding better already."

"So now Shuchun, eat and replenish your strength, for tommorrow your quest begins."


a table appeared in the centre of the room

with a vast array of exotic foods

one chair at the table four maids in wait

and beautiful aromas to make a desert salivate


fresh fruit from the trees of the silver wind plains

and wine that was made from the midnight grapes

her taste buds alive screamed in ecstasy

at the taste and the smell of such a beautiful feast


she sat back in her chair, she'd eaten too much food

tried to get up but really didn't want to move

instead she closed her eyes, and let sleep hold her mind

the chair felt like floating in a hurricane's eye


Chapter 7

a very gentle nudging, on her face a warm breeze

began to open her eyes, a blur was all she could see

just a big white shape and a warm wet tongue

her eyes finally cleared and then she saw Bai Yun


She sprang to her feet not believing what she saw

but there large as life was her beautiful horse

in a forest of green, nothing seemed to have changed

except now she noticed there was no archway


threw her arms round Bai Yun and squeezed real tight

and cried so hard for the friend she thought had died

his soft gentle breathing helped to ease her mind

and she stroked his main her tears left her eyes


the smells of the forest and the warmth of the sun

made her smile as she ambled through the trees with Bai Yun

beautiful browns and soft green hues

she felt safe back here in the place that she knew


they came to a pond, watched the butterfly's play

and the sun lit the scene in a beautiful way

the breeze moved the grass and the leaves on the trees

and sparkles of light danced for all to see


Shu Chun never saw it, her back was to Bai

he had the look of a child with mischief on his mind

put his nose on her shoulder and tussled her hair

then a nudge in the back sent her tumbling through the air


left the ground with a squeal, hit the water with a splash

disappeared beneath the surface, but didn't come back

Bai yun watched the water, head tilting side to side

then a scream from the rear gave him the shock of his life


looking at Shu on the bank from the pond

laughing so hard, he shook his head and snorted once

slowly made his way on to dryer land

and the two continued on like the very best of friends.


walked side by side on a path between the trees

felt good to have the feel of home beneath her feet

as the sun began to fade they reached the forest edge

she looked back and her eyes made a silent pledge


put her foot in a stirrup and mounted Bai Yun

and with a flick of the reins horse and rider were gone

Bai Yun's thunderous pace meant they made good time

as they rode to Shan Shulin and night was close behind.


Chapter 8


Galloping hard across the fields towards home,

Shu Chun and Bai Yun in the dusk alone

over hills , through streams and valleys they rode

and as the night settled in the night got cold


about an hour passed by when she reached the river's edge

and here they stopped so Bai Yun could rest.

They drank from the water, Shu sat for a while

and watched Bai Yun drink, on her face a smile


A little time passed by, then Shu was back in the saddle

rode a little way south till the river got shallow

crossed the fast flowing water to the other side

then headed on at speed into the dark cold night


they made good time and before very long

arrived at the cave of the dragons' song

a dimly lit cavern where the wind howled its tune

and they knew they would reach Shan Shulin very soon


Bai Yun walked slowly, hooves echoed all around

along the path between the twin pools in the ground

sloped down towards a light that cut through the gloom

and caustical reflections danced to mystical tunes


as they left the cave there stood a beautiful sight

about a mile ahead gleaming in the moonlight

the gates of Shan Shulin refracted in her eye

and the two thundered on towards a beautiful sight.


The gates got bigger the closer they got

40 feet high and 20 feet across

black wooden panels with a white metal frame

it felt so good to be home again


the gates began to open with an inward swing

and the two rode relieved in to Shan Shulin

so many people lined the streets and cheers filled the air

word of her return meant celebrations everywhere.


a little ways in she dismounted her steed

and walked among the crowd lining street after street

music was playing and the crowd sang songs

it felt good to be back where she belonged


up ahead two figures she recognised

her father and fiancé in a moon outline

she ran to them with arms open wide

and embraced them both with a long loud sigh


not a word was spoken for the longest while

then she lifted her head to show a beaming smile

her father looked at her with a fatherly smile

so pleased to see his little apple eyes


they stood where they where in the midst of the crowd

fireworks and merryment were all around

Such beautiful shapes lit up the night sky

and they let the time slowly drift by


they said their goodbyes and headed for the house

five rooms, three dogs, two cats and a mouse

once through the door they could all relax

and Shu could tell her father of the coming attack.







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